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 [5] 二割増しの事  投稿者:ぷーでる ID:qpQdgzgL7M
 2013年08月22日(Thu) 23時00分47秒
合わないとかではなく
文章構成が間違っているのです。

基本としては
まず、最初に一行空けるのが決まりです。

これでは、どの世代でも読みたがりません。

他にも気を付けないといけないのは
字が隙間なく
文章がダラダラ続いています。

更に、悪い事に横読みなので
タチが悪い。

文章構成が正しくなれば
読みやすくなるでしょう。

しかし、
それもあくまでも
基礎であって
次は応用といかなればキツイ。

私も、最初書く時
ひどい文章だったもんだ。
今でも、正しいとは言えない。

ただ、
他の皆さんの作品を読む事で
何が問題なのか見えてきました。

初めて投稿した時は、
何か月経っても
アクセス0という悲惨な状況。
そんなワケで一旦、すべて作品を削除。

数か月にわたって
他の皆さんの作品に目を通し
あとは図書館で読みまくりました。
新聞でも参考になるし。

変な話ですが
子供の作文も結構参考になるね。
あれこそ、基本が詰まっているし。

再度、投稿したところ
ここのサイトでは
感想は頂いてはいませんが
アクセス数が増えました。

内容は
問題ないと思うので
推敲してはどうでしょう?

 [4] 無題  投稿者:涸井一京 ID:iemoXq.DiE
 2013年08月18日(Sun) 11時40分49秒
ご意見ありがとうございます。

これは随分前に書いた物なので、合わないのでしょうか?

 [3] 二割増しの事  投稿者:ぷーでる ID:BTJFeSoNho
 2013年08月15日(Thu) 19時10分15秒
うーん、これはちょっと読みずらいです。
紙に書くのとは違うので・・・・・・

他の方の作品も読んで
どんな書き方が
読みやすいか
考えた方がいいですよ。

 [2] ありがとうございます  投稿者:涸井一京 ID:93Q6nu7viY
 2013年08月04日(Sun) 20時09分11秒
ぷーでるさん、感想を書いていただきありがとうございます。

 [1] 物悲しい  投稿者:ぷーでる ID:e1Pff.qM76
 2013年07月30日(Tue) 15時13分32秒
こんにちは、拝読しました。
いつもとおりというから平凡なシーンかと思ったら?
孤独な男の人生でした。
髪が薄いけど散髪しに行ったんですね。

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